Thursday, 15 December 2011
Wednesday, 14 December 2011
Friday, 9 December 2011
Evaluation Question 1- In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
By Michael and Bethan
Evaluation Question 2 - How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts (the magazine advert and CD digipak)?
After creating the video, we decided that we needed to design a similar style for the C.D panels and the poster. We decided that we wanted to have the star performer on the C.D and poster cover as it would reflect onto the audiences who sings the song and how the power of the star image could attract a wider range of audiences, so we taken a still camera and we shot in the filming green screen suite in our college.
The reason why we used such and unoriginal destination was because we wanted to create a simple, plain image for the ancillary texts to reflect that the performer not happy and in a somber mood like it is reflected in the video. We taken many shot, the props we used in the design were vital as we introduced alcoholic substances which contends sadness due to the stereotype of him being a depressive drinker, we also included his guitar to indicate that he is also the performer in the video, the audience loves to see a versatile image in the media, they like to see the authenticity of having one sole person being used for the whole filming and distribution of the song.
Right Insert: Poster with the insert of text layers and imagery of the companies endorsing the artist.
After we decided on our shots we taken the pictures to Photo shop and played around with a few designs, at first we thought we could of created a blurred image to reflect the lack of clarity in the music video between the two performers, then we decided that we might as well created a similar style to the video, yet design the ancillary texts with a design not used in the video, so what we decided to do is created a black and white filter, just like one of the lip syncing clips in the video. We then had some time to reflect on our decision and we decided that we needed some colour to catch the audience’s attention, so what I decided to do was to create a red filter over the image, i coloured in every red area in so that the main colour scheme was gray and red, this then portrayed a bright red blur in the middle of the panel and poster which would be more attention grabbing with the induce of colour.
Right Insert: Original photograph for the front cover of the C.D case.
For the inside of the panel, we decided that we wanted to imprint the lyrics on the left hand side of the C.D so that the audience could perform the track themselves as many people prefer to sing ballad typed songs than any other genre, the right panel included a bio about Ryan Star, the reason behind this is because Ryan Star is not known as a fully established star so if the audience could be given better information about Ryan Star, it would be easier to indicate a product that he brings out at a later date.
Evaluation Question 3- What have we learned from audience Feedback
We asked a sample audience for there views on our music video and to give us some feedback. Below it shows the feedback we requested from our sample audience.
David Lloyd- The camera work was good. Elements that I like were the shaky effect where the boy was in the park and he was running and really drunk. I think that the settings are appropriate and the costumes link in well with the video. I think that the target audience is young teens to young adults. I particularly liked the lip-syncing, which was done by Michael in the studio I thought that was done very well. Overall I think that the video is good.
Maryam Ismail- I think the camera work fits well and particularly I liked the transitions that were between the shots. I think that the setting was very appropriate as it is a love story, again the costumes fit well as it is typical casual clothing that people of our age actually wear which makes it feel more realistic. The video is probably aimed towards teenagers and young adults. My favorite scenes are at the train station where the boy walks away because at the start of the video I thought the boy and the girl would get together but he walks away so its an interesting storyline through out the whole video.
Adam Smith - I think the video was good I liked the whole video in general I liked the ending in particular it demonstrated the feelings of the male lead very well, emotionally invoking. The settings of the scenes are good and not to over the top like many people have in there music videos. The camera work is really good as well and I liked the fact that both characters got into character and it feels more realistic.
Kate Blair- I think that the camera work was on and off, I could see some parts were rushed. But overall it was pretty good. I like the effects you put on the clips. It captured the emotion of the ballad style song. I particularly like the scenes shot in the park and you went back and forth showing emotions at “happy times”. I feel that you were efficient considering the resources you had. I liked the costume, I thought that it was nice and stylish, fitting in with the genre of the music and setting of the video. I think that the narrative needed to be stronger and apparent, it was rather vague. The story of about the relationship was unclear, why did they separate? It could have been structured better. I also think that the lip-syncing wasn’t in line with song.
Holly Atkinson –
I have to give credit to the camera work in it looked really professional and I liked how showed the emotions of the characters involved. I liked the different filters and effects like shaking off the camera when Michael was in the park and drunk. I like the fact that it didn't go with the majority of the types of videos that are on the music channels now that just feature guns, drugs and girls in bikinis. I also liked the fact that it wasn’t a “typical” love story music video.
Leah Andrew- I think the video was good I liked the video in general. The settings were good. I liked it, the use of ideas for example the idea of where the performer Michael was drunk and depressed and went rushing around Manchester looking for his girlfriend. The props that were used My favorite scene was at the end where the couple walked past giving it a great level of emotion. Overall I think you did a great job.After requesting feedback from a sample audience, our music video received really positive feedback.
A typical comment was that it was creative and the ideas for the storyline was really good. This storyline also related to some people’s lives and so this immediately interested them.
The audience’s overall response from the video was that we had used a wide range of different shots, from close up shots to location shots; to stimulate interest. The use of different types of shots encourages the audience watching the music video to perceive it in different ways, and also creates a successful and professional feel towards the music video.
Another strength that was given was the lip-syncing, which was done by Michael in the studio. A comment we received by the audience feedback was the lip-syncing was done in time and matched the lyric of the songs perfectly.
Not all music videos are made the way people want it. There are things within our music video which we could have improved on and made better.
The audience, which viewed our music video, felt some of the lip-syncing wasn’t in line with the song.
Another problem addressed was that the narrative needed to be stronger and apparent, it was rather vague. And the story should have been clearer about the relationship.
From our audience feedback we have learnt a lot, the audience feedback picks out both positives and negatives about the music video and it allows us to get an idea of what people think of it, and what can be done to make it better.
Evaluation Question 4-How did you use media technologies in construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?
Final Poster Design
This is our final poster design, the man features of our poster is the black and white filter, with the insert of a red colouring on Michael's t-shirt, this creates a somber, negative approach to the album, this is vital for the target audience as it is a soft, slow rock genre that we tried to promote during our advertisement of our music video. We then created a text layering informing the reader of who the artist is, what the album is called and the release date, we created a stroke boarder around the text to make the text more eye catching if the audience is walking past the poster, the border is also important as it creates a contrast in colours throughout the poster of three major colours, Red, Gray and the border Black.
We also inserted images of the record company for copyright issues and we also inserted two companies which sell the music for Ryan Star, Hmv and itunes, the reason why we chosen the these two companies was because they are major music record shops, so the target audience will be able to easily access the album from there desired company. We also inserted a unique item of an award nomination, this was an easy decision for us to insert the item as it would connote that the music is a award winning piece of music, so more people would be attracted towards buying the album.
By Michael Redmond
Thursday, 8 December 2011
Album Cover
Right Inside Album Cover
Inside CD Panel Cover
I decided to put the lyrics to his hit song 'The last Train Home' on the CD Album, so that people are able to sing along with the song. I decided to use this image as the backgroung as this image has got something to do with the music video for this song. I chose to do this, because i once brought an Album and it contained a little book with all the lyrics and i thought it was a good way for people to grasp the lyirics to the song easily.
Storyline of the Music Video
By Michael Redmond
How does mise en scene and performance contribute to representations?
His drunk state is then fully identified as he manages to fall over in the video, which represents how he can not stand on his own two feet due to him being dependant on the woman he loves.
Later in the video there is a extreme long shot of Michael on his own, this represents his lonely state as the street he is on is deserted and no one is on it, this represents that he is in his own world on his own and that no one is there for him.
There is then parallel editing as there is an image of Michael and Bethan together, the light filter creates as nostalgic representation that Michael was once happy and that it connotes why he is now upset, because he is on his own.
The video also inserts an implied meaning in the performance, there are frequent places where Michael is smiling throughout the performance which connotes that all in all, the storyline is fictional and the main protagonist is actually happy, this is important for the target audience as they would rather buy music of a positively influenced artist, rather than a negatively influenced artist.
Another shot of the performance is when Michael is in the red polo, he begins to use paralinguistic features to express his passion towards the song, this promotes that the artist is real and passionate in what his Career is.
There is then a sped up motion of Michael sat on the wall, this represents him wasting time due to not having anything important to do now that the one he loves has gone.
A image was then shown of Michael running frantically, this is evidence to needing the one he loves as he is using up all his energy to find the girl in the video.
There is then a shot of Michael looking back to see Bethan standing in front of him,there is also a long two shot of the two characters,the shocked look on his face represents that he is so surprised that he actually found the one that he loves after the split, it is almost a Hollywood styled happy ending set up which has been produced.
The defining image in the whole video is Michael walking away, this represents that he has had enough of feeling down and let down by the girl in the video, this is met by his power in walking away and understanding that there is a life after love.
There is then an image of Michael on grass opening his eyes, this represents that he is watching the clouds go by, he is happier with a simpler life.
The last image in the video is the light in the recording studio, this represents that there is always light at the end of a situation in life and that every bad aspect in life will one day be sorted out and we will all live peacefully.
By Michael Redmond
Notes on our initial planning and inspration for our music video
Our inspiration for our planning came from music videos such as Rhianna- unfaithful and even a modern interpretation of Bon Jovi's - Always,
do create this we decided that we needed to create a music video for a soft rock artist or group who did not already have a music video for their song. Originally, we decided that we wanted to create an amplified narrative for U2- With or without you, as their original music video was a simple styled performance. After constant planning of our video we came to the conclusion that the video would start with an image of a guy and girl in love, then it will show that the girl had to go away, so the guy was going to get onto a train then and run away in the video, we decided that the whole video was going to be shot in black and white, in the end, we decided to reject this idea for the whole video as the colour of the parallel editing of Me and Bethan together would not be as significant if it was in a black and white filter, yet we did, in the end, decided to create some of the performance and one clip in black and white to keep to our original idea. we then decided that in the video, we were going to improvise and create Scenario’s which would make the main protagonist reflect the emotion that he feels out of place, then in the video, we were going to create a scene where he finds out his ex girlfriend has a new love,
this would upset him, yet throughout the video, there are images of people coming up to him and helping him out, they connote that people like him and how he is not on his own, yet he ignores all the help and walks away from the help, alone. There is then a cut scene to the protagonist in a deserted area holding a picture of the girl, who he once loved, the camera would then change focus from the shallow focus of the picture, to the deep focus of the girl standing right in front of him.
To create an original video, we then made the main protagonist walk away from the one he loves, this will represent his strength in life and how no one can ever become dependent on another person as they can always get over a tricky area in life.
In reality, our final draft of the video storyboard is similar to the original design, the reason for this is that we had a lot of different features that were entertaining and influential throughout the original storyboard planning, the main area we deleted in the original storyboard is the photograph being held by the main protagonist, the reason why we changed that was because we also decided that we wanted to change the song to the video, we decided that Ryan Star’s- Last Train Home was a more influential song for the style of video we were creating and we wanted to concentrate on having a scene on a platform throughout the video to illustrate the lyrics in the song.
By Michael Redmond
Copyright Issues
By Michael Redmond
Shot List of a specific scene in our video
1- Extreme Long Shot - reflect his loneliness, he is on his own.
2. Medium Shot (performance)- The lip syncing represents his passion for the song.
3. Long Tracking shot- he walks onto the bus and the camera follows.
4. Long Shot of Michael running- at the bottom of the frame to represent how powerless he is no that he does not has his Ex.
5.Long Shot (Performance)- Shows the paralinguistic features as he lip sync's.
6.Long Shot- reverse zoom- creates an establishing shot to where he is, location wise.
7. Long shot (Performance)- slight low angle to show his dominant status in song.
8. Extreme long shot- establishes that his ex is walking upon the platform
9. Medium shot (performance)- closer shot reflects more performance emotion.
10. Long shot track to right- establishes Michael running onto the platform.
11.Extreme long shot- once again establishing his Ex getting closer towards the platform.
12.Long shot (Performance)- Paralinguistic features are still evident throughout the scene.
13. Medium Shot (Performance)- The change in length creates a greater development in identifying emotion in the performer.
14. Close up- (performance)- close up from the side to represent angled responses towards the audience.
15.Medium shot- the distant look on Michael's face connotes his fear.
16.Long two shot- The platform represent them meeting for the first time.
17. Medium Shot (Performance)- portraying emotion once again.
18.Long two shot- Represents the pause between one another.
19. Long shot track up- shows Michael's shaken state.
20. Long shot (Performance)- continuation of paralinguistic features.
21. Shot/reverse/ medium shot- represents Michael's and Ex's emotions towards one
another.
22.close up (Performance)-Reflects mass emotion in performer.
23. Long two shot- shot Michael walking towards ex, represent ending to video, vital moment.
24.Long shot (performance)-Calming down of emotion, represent ending of video.
25.Long two shot- Michael walking away represent his strength.
26. Medium shot of Michael lying on the grass, representing he is happier lone.
27.Long shot ( performance)- His sad look on Michael's face represent he is upset from the series of events.
28.close up (performance)- different angle to evident previous shot.
29. Establishing shot- of light to represent the cliche- light at the end of the tunnel.
By Michael Redmond
Monday, 5 December 2011
What is Goodwin's theory and how did we imply it into our music video ?
-Thought beats – seeing the sound.
- Star Image
-Relation of visuals to song.
-Technical Aspects of a Music video.
Firstly, Goodwin’s fist aspect was creating a music video with “thought beats”, the implied meaning of this is to look into the structure and how it is set out to portray the star image of the performer or how it explains the narrative, an example of this theory in our music video is that when the song cut to the chorus, Michael (me), would be seen lip sync hing to the song, this reflects the power of the voice as for our genre of a soft rock ballad, the powerful voice and heart in the song is the most important aspect of the video to reflect the star image. Goodwin also portrayed the performer to be a storyteller of the narrative, that songs are stories, told by the artist, he says that a music video is a form of communication between the audience and the performer.
Goodwin’s second theory is that, a song fails to give a complete narrative and performance, because of the use of parallel editing music videos, it is only very rarely we see a full narrative or a full performance to a song, Goodwin also appraises that ignoring common narrative is important in their role of advertising the music to the target audience, examples of this in our music video is making Michael walk away from the girl at the end of the video, this is unorthodox and almost a juxtaposition compared to the lyrics and genre of the song. Goodwin says that the music video should have a repeatability factor which makes the target audience not become bored after repetitive viewing of the video, he also feels that including the star performer into the narrative structure of the video increases authenticity in the video and that creates a sense of realism among the audience along with a good use of lip syncing in the correct places.
Goodwin also believes that the star image has a major part to play in the music video, he feels that the star should show his development throughout the video, this would attract larger audiences, an example of this in our video is when in our music video, I have long hair through the narrative aspect, and my hair is cut throughout the performance, this could indicate that the performance is after the whole fiasco of the narrative and it reflects the star’s development of life through the video.
In the relations of visuals to the song, it is split into three categories within the narrative, Illustrate- which is setting images to compose along the lyrics of the video, Amplify- which means to have a style in your narrative which is similar to the lyrics and genre of the song, and Disjuncture- where the meaning of the song is completely ignored. Our video is mostly categorised as being Amplified, the reasons for this is the narrative is about the star performer looking for the girl in the video, it reflects how he is in love with the girl in the video, which is also apparent in the lyrics of the song as well, yet we did not mimic the actions of the narrative to the lyrics, an example of this would of been, if when the lyrics of “tears coming down”, if we were being illustrate, we would of had an image of him crying, we felt like this was insulting the intelligence of the audience as we feel like they would understand the narrative of our video without visual actions along with the lyrics.
The last aspect of Goodwin’s theory is the technical aspects of the video which fixes the video together, this can be throughout the camera work, movement, angle, Mise-en-scene, editing, sound and special effects. For the filming aspect of the course, we created long, medium speed cutting clips throughout the video to convey the slow ballad, yet compliment the powerful chorus; we had a lot of medium to long shots to engage the emotions of the performer to the audience along with the long shots to indicate what actions he is undertaking in the video. For the lighting and colour, we created a damp cloudy filter over the video to reflect the performers depression when not being with the girl in the video, we also included a bright ray filter when the performer was reminiscing over being together with the girl, this represented the areas in the video where the performer was once happy and now he is not. We also attempted to maintain a professional Mise-en-scene by making sure I wore the same clothes every time we filmed the narrative section, that is we were cutting a trimming videos, that a re-shoot of a particular shot was started in the same position the last clip ended, and the use of props, the microphone for the performance and the suitcase of the girl created authenticity within the video as it gave indication of what is happening through the narrative and performance of the video. We also used in some cases beats to cut to another clip in the video, this was usually done from the transfer of the narrative to the performance, evidence of this is to cut to the performance of the video as soon as the chorus began, this makes the video more entertaining for the audience as they have an overload of features used in the video to comment on and analyse.
Use of technology for communication purposes
to Loreto College, so we deicided, that it was sensible to meet up in the locations we were filming in rather than all go as a group from college. The advance in technology made this process much more easier as we were able to instantly communicate with one another if any problems occured, a firm example of this is that once, we only decided where we were filming the night before the day we were actually filming, so we were all able to spread the word to one another instantly due to my smart phone, examples of this was i was inboxing Saba on facebook on the internet on my phone. I was then BlackBerry Messaging Abdul which is a unique feature of the actual BloackBerry company, and i was also using the "traditional" feature of texting Bethan, the use of my BlackBerry made the filming the process a lot more productive time as there was no albi to be late or lost as there was recorded Data then of where we were going to meet and what time.
By Michael Redmond
Tuesday, 29 November 2011
Equipment used throughout the course
Probably the most important piece of equipment we had was the actual camera, self explanitary really, we used it to shoot the whole enitre video, the college provided us with the camera so that we could keep perfect brightness and filter throughout the whole video that way.
We decided to use a tirpod throughout our filming so that we could creat a smooth tilt and pan, and even keep shots steady through some rough weather, this proved to be very useful as there was no use in shake reduction as the tripod kep the shot still and clean.
Filming challenges and triumps.
We then faced another challenege when we filmed in the local shopping centre in Manchester, we did not have the permission to film there so we got asked to move one, the problem faced with this was we didnt get everything we wanted in the centre to use for the film, so we decided that we would only use small clippings from the centre and insert them around the film itself.
Then on the friday after we filmed in the Arndale, disaster struck again !, we spent hours on end filming in the local met stopy, filming the most important part of the vilm, the ending and as we had one more clip to film, the met police came and moved us on, we were distrought as we did not know what to do, so we phoned up the metrolink media gorup to ask for permission, the reason to get filming permission on the platform on the wednesday, yet wednesday came and no phone call came, so we took a risk, we got to the platform shortly after lunch and filmed as many clips as fast as we possibly could, and finally we had every platform clip we needed. It became clear that if we taken the risk in our film, we were only going to get the best results.
Yet on the positive side of the coin, we filmed a considerable amount of footage so it was easily acceptable to cut and paste certain areas together, keeping good continuity. In towards the end of the filming aspect of the course, we realised that we did not have an adiquette amount of perfomormance in our video, to resolve this we decided to have two master performances of me in the studio lip syncing the video, this proved to be highly sucessful as it given us the opotunity to base a narrative around a performance instead of a performance arount a narrative, which would of been much more challeging due to the timing of lip syncing and placing the performance in correct times.
Saturday, 26 November 2011
Michael Redmond's- Personal Opinion of the filming aspect.
sometimes it rained and we filmed in crowded areas and for me being claustrophobic, it was very uncomfortable, I had to constantly wear the same clothes almost everyday and people began to wonder did my wardrobe set a light or something, I also wore a t-shirt which was "childish" at best underneath my shirt so i was also the end of all running jokes, yet all the negative aside, some areas were good, we created a few laughs and even memories, my running in the video was humerus to some and also the pedestrian interaction put a brighter aspect on the filming days, although there are areas to improve on whilst filming , performance wise, I did all in all enjoy it even though i did find it challenging.
By Michael Redmond